English Rendering
When I questioned your pupil, under a pine-tree,
"My teacher," he answered, " went for herbs,
But toward which corner of the mountain,
How can I tell, through all these clouds ?"
Poem translator: Kiang Kanghu
When I questioned your pupil, under a pine-tree,
"My teacher," he answered, " went for herbs,
But toward which corner of the mountain,
How can I tell, through all these clouds ?"
Poem translator: Kiang Kanghu
松下问童子,言师采药去。
只在此山中,云深不知处。
Jia Dao's Xun Yin Zhe Bu Yu (寻隐者不遇) is a five-character quatrain (jueju) written during the poet's later years as a monk and wandering poet. It opens with a simple scene that feels like a painting: Song xia wen tong zi, yan shi cai yao qu. (松下问童子,言师采药去。) Under a tall pine tree, the poet stops and asks the young servant boy, "Where is your master?" The boy answers plainly, "He has gone to gather herbs." The words are as simple as a conversation on any mountain path.
The poet asks again, and the answer grows more mysterious: Zhi zai ci shan zhong, yun shen bu zhi chu. (只在此山中,云深不知处。) "He is somewhere in this mountain. But the clouds are so deep, I do not know where." The master is close—on the same mountain, perhaps just around the next bend. Yet the clouds hide him completely. The poem ends here, with the poet standing under the pine, looking up at white mist that will not open.
Jia Dao never tells us if he waited, if he climbed higher, or if he turned back. He simply leaves us with the clouds. And this is the secret of the poem's power. The hermit we never see becomes more interesting than the hermit we might have met. He is a man who belongs to the mountain, the pine, and the mist—not to the world of visitors. The poem is called "Not Finding," but the not-finding is the real gift. It reminds us that some things are beautiful precisely because they stay hidden.
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