After Finishing a Poem
- Poetry of Jia Dao

《题诗后》

English Rendering

Those two lines cost me three years:

I chant them once and get two more, of tears.

Friend, if you don't like them…

I'll go home, and lie down,

in the ancient mountain autumn.

After Finishing a Poem by Jia Dao
After Finishing a Poem by Jia Dao

Original Text (中文原文)

二句三年得,一吟双泪流。

知音如不赏,归卧故山秋。

Analysis & Context

This is a five-character quatrain composed by Jia Dao, a poet of the Tang Dynasty. The first two lines depict the arduous toil of poetic composition and the rarity of crafting fine verses, such that the poet cannot hold back his tears after completing the poem; the latter two lines express his hope that his friend will appreciate his work, revealing an undertone of self-assurance and even conceit.

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