On the Lake (Riverside Town)
- Poetry of Su Shi

《江城子·湖上》

- Last updated: 2024-03-23 17:13:35

中文原文

凤凰山下雨初晴，水风清，晚霞明。

一朵芙蕖，开过尚盈盈。

何处飞来双白鹭，如有意，慕娉婷。

忽闻江上弄哀筝，苦含情，遣谁听！

烟敛云收，依约是湘灵。

欲待曲终寻问取，人不见，数峰青。

English Translation

It turns fine after rain below the Phoenix Hill,

Waves and wind light,

Rainbow clouds bright.

A lotus flower past full bloom beams with smile still.

Where comes in flight

A pair of egrets white

As if inclined to care

For maidens fair.

Suddenly on the stream music comes to the ear.

Who would not hear

Such feeling drear?

Away clouds and mist clear;

The Spirit of River Xiang seems to appear.

When music ends,I would inquire for the lutist dear.

She seems to disappear,

Only leaving peaks clear.

By Su Shi

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