Night in the Taoist Cosmos​​
- Poetry of Qiwu Qian

《宿太平观》

English Rendering

The jade metropolis swallows sunset’s spit,

Galaxies dangle like unwashed hair.

My soul divorces ribs to flirt with dream-butterflies,

Dawn’s rooster crows with iron-feathered glare.


Flowers weep glass tears onto granite cheeks,

Pines jerk off streams in icy streaks.

At daybreak I’ll fuck this flesh cocoon,

Saluting entropy’s cartoon.

Night in the Taoist Cosmos​​ by Qiwu Qian
Night in the Taoist Cosmos​​ by Qiwu Qian

Original Text (中文原文)

夕到玉京寝,窅冥云汉低。

魂交仙室蝶,曙听羽人鸡。

滴沥花上露,清泠松下谿。

明当访真隐,挥手入无倪。

Analysis & Context

This seven-character regulated verse was composed during Qi Wuqian's overnight stay at Taiping Abbey, a Daoist temple nestled in secluded mountains. The poem captures the mystical atmosphere of the sacred site, where the vastness of heaven and earth merges with human contemplation. Through vivid imagery of celestial realms and natural serenity, Qi transitions from worldly clamor to spiritual transcendence, revealing his yearning for reclusive enlightenment.

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