Admiring Vice Censor Yang’s Pure Prose
- Poetry of Qian Qi

《美杨侍御清文见示》
Admiring Vice Censor Yang’s Pure Prose by Qian Qi
English Translation

Since Boya’s art was lost to time,

His broken strings found none to climb.

Who knew after his highest song,

A strain more rare would come along?


Peaks layering peaks, streams crystal-clear—

Their rival motions crash and veer.

Yet your pure prose needs no outdoors,

All scenes alive behind closed doors.


Mists and snows fill your breast’s hold,

Orchids pile in your lap’s fold.

Moonlight on jade-green pools takes shape,

A Kunlun-jade without escape.


First, you sang ‘Spring Sunlight’ bright—

Dead wood flushed with young buds’ light.

Then ‘White Snow’ chills your tongue—

At once, clouds freeze where notes are flung.


Thus we learn Creation’s source

Contracts, expands at heart’s discourse.

Such writing’s rare; its cleansing power—

Could ink-stained sleeves ever devour?

Let me stitch these words in silk,

To wear close as eternal milk.

This poem was composed during the mid-Tang Dynasty as Qian Qi's inspired response after reading Yang Shiyu's "Pure Prose." The term "Pure Prose" in the title refers to writing that is refreshingly elegant and lofty in style. Deeply impressed by Yang's literary talent, Qian Qi crafted this poem to express his admiration. The verses weave classical allusions with layered imagery to depict the beauty of the text, culminating in praise and earnest hopes—revealing Tang literati's reverence for refined writing and their yearning for kindred artistic spirits.


中文原文( Chinese )

层峰与清流,逸势竞奔蹙。

清文不出户,仿像皆在目。

雾雪看满怀,兰荃坐盈掬。

孤光碧潭月,一片昆仑玉。

初见歌阳春,韶光变枯木。

再见吟白雪,便觉云肃肃。

则知造化源,方寸能展缩。

斯文不易遇,清爽心岂足。

愿言书诸绅,可以为佩服。

Why Chinese poems is so special?
The most distinctive features of Chinese poetry are: concision- many poems are only four lines, and few are much longer than eight; ambiguity- number, tense and parts of speech are often undetermined, creating particularly rich interpretative possibilities; and structure- most poems follow quite strict formal patterns which have beauty in themselves as well as highlighting meaningful contrasts.
How to read a Chinese poem?
Like an English poem, but more so. Everything is there for a reason, so try to find that reason. Think about all the possible connotations, and be aware of the different possibilities of number and tense. Look for contrasts: within lines, between the lines of each couplet and between successive couplets. Above all, don't worry about what the poet meant- find your meaning.

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