Joy of Eternal Union The Pavilion of Swallows

Poetry of Su Shi 《永遇乐·彭城夜宿燕子楼》

English Rendering

I lodged at the Pavilion of Swallows in Pengcheng,dreamed of the fair lady Panpan,and wrote the following poem.

The bright moonlight is like frost white,

The gentle breeze like water clean:

Far and wide extends the night scene.

In the haven fish leap

And dew-drops roll down lotus leaves 

In solitude no man perceives.

Drums beat thrice in the night so deep,

A leaf falls with a tinkling sound so loud 

That gloomy,I awake from my dream of the Cloud.

Under the boundless pall of night,

Nowhere again can she be found

Though in the small garden I have walked around 


A tired wayfarer far from home.

In the mountains may roam,

His native land from view is blocked

The Pavilion of Swallows is empty.Where 

Is the lady so fair?

In the Pavilion only swallows'nest is locked.

Both the past and the present are like dreams,

From which we have ne'er been awake,it seems.

We have but joys and sorrows old and new.

Some other day others will come to view 

The Yellow Tower's night scenery,

Then they would sigh for me!

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"Joy of Eternal Union The Pavilion of Swallows" by Su Shi

Original Text (中文原文)

彭城夜宿燕子楼,梦盼盼,因作此词。

明月如霜,好风如水,清景无限。

曲港跳鱼,圆荷泻露,寂寞无人见。

紞如三鼓,铿然一叶,黯黯梦云惊断。

夜茫茫,重寻无处,觉来小园行遍。

天涯倦客,山中归路,望断故园心眼。

燕子楼空,佳人何在,空锁楼中燕。

古今如梦,何曾梦觉,但有旧欢新怨。

异时对,黄楼夜景,为余浩叹。

Meaning & Analysis

The Architecture of Haunting: Sensory Realism, Historical Transience, and the Symmetrical Dream Loop in Su Shi's "Yong Yu Le"

The Pristine Vacuum: Nocturnal Geography and Unwitnessed Luxury

Su Shi’s Yong Yu Le (永遇乐·彭城夜宿燕子楼)—composed during his governorship of Pengcheng (Xuzhou) while sleeping in the legendary Yanzi Tower (Swallow Tower)—opens by establishing a state of absolute, sterile environmental purity: Ming yue ru shuang, hao feng ru水, qing jing wu xian. (明月如霜,好风如水,清景无限。). The moon is transuted into frost and the wind into water, creating a highly tactile, cold, and fluid atmosphere. This boundless clarity instantly transitions into micro-sensory tracking: Qu gang tiao yu, yuan he xie lu, ji mo ren jian. (曲港跳鱼,圆荷泻露,寂寞无人见。). The sound of a fish breaking the water's surface in the winding harbor and the optical flash of dew spilling from round lotus leaves are documented with precision. Through a structuralist framework, this is a landscape operating as a pristine vacuum. Nature performs its beautiful, delicate micro-movements in absolute solitude; its luxury is explicitly 无人见 (witnessed by no one), establishing a profound state of cosmic alienation where the human observer feels like a phantom intruder.

The Acoustic Fracture: The Drum, the Leaf, and Mnemonic Disorientation

The structural pivot of the first stanza executes a violent disruption of the subject's psychology through a sudden auditory shock: Dan ru san gu, keng ran yi ye, an an meng duan. (紞如三鼓,铿然一叶,黯黯梦断。). The deep, mechanical rumble of the midnight drum (the third watch) is symmetrically answered by the sharp, metallic clang (keng ran) of a single falling leaf. This acoustic pairing instantly shatters his dream state (meng duan). Waking into absolute darkness, Su Shi details a state of profound spatial and mnemonic disorientation: Ye mang mang, zhong xun wu chu, jue lai xiao yuan xing bian. (夜茫茫,重寻无处,觉来小园行遍。). The night is boundless and blind. Unable to locate the coordinates of his lost dream, the poet physically paces through every corner of the small garden. This kinetic restlessness transforms the physical garden into a labyrinth of longing, where the waking body searches vainly for the lost sovereignty of the subconscious mind.

The Double Void: The Empty Cage of the Courtesan

The second stanza elevates the lyric from personal insomniac complaint to a monumental meditation on cultural topography and gendered history: Yan zi lou kong, jia ren he zai, kong suo lou zhong yan. (燕子楼空,佳人何在,空锁楼中燕。). Su Shi summons the ghost of 关盼盼 (Guan Panpan)—the famous Tang Dynasty courtesan who spent two decades locked in this very tower in a state of voluntary, melancholic isolation out of loyalty to her deceased lover. The phrase 空 (kong) operates through a crushing, symmetrical duplication: the tower is physically empty of its historical beauty, yet the architecture continues to vainly "lock up" the literal swallows nesting in its eaves. Through a materialist critique, the physical structure acts as an institutional cage that outlives the human flesh it was built to contain, highlighting the brutal indifference of stone and wood against the transience of human emotion.

The Infinite Symmetrical Dream Loop: The Futility of Awakening

The masterpiece achieves its immortal, devastating philosophical climax by formulating an absolute axiom regarding human history and existential time: Gu jin ru meng, he ceng meng jue, dan you jiu huan xin yuan. (古今如梦,何曾梦觉,但有旧欢新怨。). Su Shi expands his lens to collapse all of past and present into a singular, perpetual illusion—"Past and present are like a dream." He then poses his most terrifying question: "When has humanity ever truly awoken from this dream?" There is no baseline waking reality; existence is merely a succession of dreams nesting within dreams, where the only historical constants are the endless, cyclical recycling of old joys and new resentments (jiu huan xin yuan). The poem concludes by projecting an extraordinary futuristic symmetry: Yi shi dui, Huang lou ye jing, wei yu hao tan. (异时对,黄楼夜景,为余浩叹。). Just as Su Shi stands at the Yanzi Tower sighing for Guan Panpan, he foresees a future traveler standing at his own architectural monument (the Yellow Tower), weeping for Su Shi. The lyric stands as a monumental manual of existential fatalism, proving that humanity is permanently trapped inside an architectural mirror-hall of history, where every generation is fated to inherit and replay the exact same sighs of the dead.

Reader's Companion

The Essence of the Verse

Classical Chinese poetry thrives on Concision and Ambiguity. Without tense or number, the words create a timeless space where the reader becomes the co-creator of the poem's meaning.

Reading Between the Lines

Look for Contrasts: light and shadow, movement and stillness. Don't just translate the words; feel the Yijing (artistic conception) that lingers long after the last character.

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