English Rendering
The going-out lamp seems flameless, looms dim and flickering;
This evening I hear my friend’s relegated to Jiujiang,
Which makes me startled and sit up although I am dying,
Into my window a dark wind with a cold rain blows strong.
The going-out lamp seems flameless, looms dim and flickering;
This evening I hear my friend’s relegated to Jiujiang,
Which makes me startled and sit up although I am dying,
Into my window a dark wind with a cold rain blows strong.
残灯无焰影幢幢,此夕闻君谪九江。
垂死病中惊坐起,暗风吹雨入寒窗。
Yuan Zhen's Wen Letian Shou Jiangzhou Sima (闻乐天授江州司马)—translated as On Hearing the News that My Friend Bai Juyi Is Relegated to Jiujiang—opens with a diagnostic image of terminal interiority: Can deng wu yan ying chuang chuang. (残灯无焰影幢幢。). The "lamp" (deng) is not merely an object of illumination but a somatic proxy for the poet's own failing life-force. It is "crippled" or "residual" (can), its flame extinguished (wu yan), leaving only a "shadow swaying" (ying chuang chuang)—a flickering, unstable silhouette without heat or source. This is not romantic chiaroscuro; it is a medical vital sign expressed in domestic hardware. The lamp's extinction mirrors Yuan Zhen's own physical condition: he is writing from a sickbed, and the room's darkness is coextensive with his body's decline. The swaying shadow becomes the visual equivalent of a pulse that is weak, irregular, and proximate to cessation.
The second line introduces the external catastrophe that penetrates this chamber of dying light: Ci xi wen jun zhe Jiujiang. (此夕闻君谪九江。). "This evening" (ci xi)—the temporal precision is surgical. The news does not arrive as abstract information; it arrives as a punctual event that occupies the same nocturnal space as the dying lamp. The verb wen (闻)—"to hear," "to learn"—suggests a passive reception, yet the content of the news is an active demolition. Bai Juyi (Letian) has been "relegated" (zhe) to Jiujiang, appointed as the low-ranking military adjutant (sima) in the remote prefecture of Jiangzhou. In the mid-Tang political lexicon, this demotion is not merely a career setback; it is a form of spatial exile that carries the stigma of imperial displeasure. The poet, already physically compromised, receives this bulletin as a second assault upon his own organism.
The third line delivers one of the most kinetic and devastating images in Tang friendship poetry: Chui si bing zhong jing zuo qi. (垂死病中惊坐起。). "Dying in illness" (chui si bing zhong)—the phrase is not hyperbolic. Yuan Zhen was gravely ill in Tongzhou when he composed this poem. The body is horizontal, passive, and oriented toward death. Yet the news of Bai Juyi's exile triggers a neurological and muscular event that overrides the body's terminal trajectory: he "startles" (jing) and "sits up" (zuo qi). This is not a gradual awakening but a violent, involuntary spasm of sympathetic shock. The dying body refuses its own death protocol in order to register the political death of his friend. The line is a masterclass in what might be called "pathological solidarity"—the physical system of one man convulsing in response to the bureaucratic amputation of another. It transforms political empathy into a medical emergency.
The final line completes the poem with an environmental invasion that mirrors the emotional catastrophe: An feng chui yu ru han chuang. (暗风吹雨入寒窗。). The "dark wind" (an feng) is not merely a meteorological description; it is a malevolent agent that operates without light, without warning, and without mercy. It "blows rain" (chui yu) into the "cold window" (han chuang)—the same window behind which the poet has just sat up in shock. The rain's entry into the chamber dissolves the boundary between interior and exterior, between the sickroom and the political climate. The cold window, which should offer shelter and separation, becomes a permeable membrane through which the empire's cruelty enters as damp, chill, and darkness. The poem ends not with consolation, but with the total collapse of environmental shelter: the poet, already dying, now sits upright in a room that the weather itself has invaded, sharing his friend's exile through the medium of atmospheric penetration.
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