Water Dragon Chant-On Riverside Tower at Jiankang

Poetry of Xin Qiji 《水龙吟·登建康赏心亭》

English Rendering

The Southern sky for miles and miles in autumn dye,

And boundless autumn water spread to meet the sky,

I gaze on far-off Northern hills 

Like spiral shells or hair decor of jade 

Which grief or hatred overfills.

Leaning at sunset on balustrade 

And hearing a lonely swan's song,

A wanderer on Southern land,

I look at my precious sword long 

And pound all the railings with my hand,

But nobody knows why 

I climb the tower high.


Don't say for food 

The perch is good.

When the west winds blow,

Why don't I homeward go?

I'd be ashamed to see the patriot,

Should I retire to seek for land and cot.

I sigh for passing years I can't retain,

In driving wind and blinding rain 

Even an old tree grieves.

To whom then may I say 

To wipe my tears away

With her pink handkerchief or her green sleeves?

Water Dragon Chant-On Riverside Tower at Jiankang by Xin Qiji -  Patriotism  Heroic Poetry  Autumn Sorrow  Lost Territories  Suppressed Ambition
"Water Dragon Chant-On Riverside Tower at Jiankang" by Xin Qiji

Original Text (中文原文)

楚天千里清秋,水随天去秋无际。

遥岑远目,献愁供恨,玉簪螺髻。

落日楼头,断鸿声里,江南游子。

把吴钩看了,栏杆拍遍,无人会,登临意。

休说鲈鱼堪脍,尽西风,季鹰归未?

求田问舍,怕应羞见,刘郎才气。

可惜流年,忧愁风雨,树犹如此!

倩何人唤取,红巾翠袖,揾英雄泪?

Meaning & Analysis

The Wrath of a Caged Tiger: Pounding the Railings of Jiankang

Written by the warrior-poet Xin Qiji (1140–1207) while stationed in Jiankang (modern-day Nanjing), "Shui Long Yin" (水龙吟·登建康赏心亭) is a monumental e­xpression of suppressed patriotic fury. Standing at a pavilion that historically overlooked the border between the Southern Song and the occupied North, Xin Qiji transforms a traditional autumn landscape into a sprawling canvas of national tragedy and personal agony.

The Vast Autumn and the Lost North

The poem opens with a breathtaking, yet oppressive, cinematic sweep: miles of autumn sky meeting boundless water. When the poet gazes at the "far-off Northern hills," comparing them to "spiral shells or hair decor of jade," he is not merely admiring the view. These mountains represent the Central Plains (Zhongyuan), his homeland, which has been lost to the Jin invaders. The landscape itself is "overfilled with grief or hatred," mirroring the poet's internal state.

The Sword and the Balustrade: A Warrior's Frustration

The physical actions in the first stanza are immortalized in Chinese literary history. As a "wanderer on Southern land," he looks longingly at his "precious sword" (吴钩)—a weapon meant for reclaiming territory, now rusting in peacetime. The act of "pounding all the railings" (拍遍栏杆) is a visceral display of a warrior's frustration. He is a caged tiger, bursting with military genius, yet ignored by a pacifist court. The tragedy culminates in the realization that "nobody knows why" he climbs the tower; his profound patriotism is completely misunderstood by his contemporaries.

Rejecting the Hermit's Comfort

In the second half, Xin Qiji wrestles with the temptation to give up. He references ancient historical figures who retired to their hometowns for good food ("the perch") or to buy property ("land and cot"). However, he violently rejects this path of comfort. He declares he would be "ashamed to see the patriot" if he abandoned his national duty for personal peace. This highlights his uncompromising moral integrity and heroic spirit (Haofang).

Tears Without a Confidante

The conclusion shifts from roaring anger to profound, desolate sorrow. Comparing himself to an "old tree" grieving in the wind and rain, he laments his passing youth. The final question—asking who might wipe his tears with a "pink handkerchief"—is not a plea for romance, but a stark declaration of ultimate isolation. He weeps not for himself, but for a dying nation, and realizes there is no one in the world who truly comprehends the depth of his heroic tears.

Reader's Companion

The Essence of the Verse

Classical Chinese poetry thrives on Concision and Ambiguity. Without tense or number, the words create a timeless space where the reader becomes the co-creator of the poem's meaning.

Reading Between the Lines

Look for Contrasts: light and shadow, movement and stillness. Don't just translate the words; feel the Yijing (artistic conception) that lingers long after the last character.

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