The Highest Tower

Poetry of Xin Qiji 《最高楼·吾衰矣》

English Rendering

I am old now.

Do I care for wealth and rank the world prizes?

Wealth and rank would lead to crisis.

Mu left the king who neglected to serve him wine,

And Tao would not bow for his stipend but resign.

Master Mu,

Prefect Tao,

I’ll learn from you.

I’ll build a garden called “Recluse”

And a pavilion where I may do what I choose.

I’ll drink at leisure

And chant with pleasure.

Land changes hands from year to year in north and south.

How many spoonfuls could one put at once in his mouth?

Stop your old song!

Do not tell me what’s right or wrong!

The Highest Tower by Xin Qiji -  Ci   Aging   Reclusion   Irony   Satire
"The Highest Tower" by Xin Qiji

Original Text (中文原文)

吾拟乞归,犬子以田产未置止我,赋此骂之。

吾衰矣,须富贵何时?富贵是危机。暂忘设醴抽身去,未曾得米弃官归。穆先生,陶县令,是吾师。

待葺个园儿名“佚老”,更作个亭儿名“亦好”,闲饮酒,醉吟诗。千年田换八百主,一人口插几张匙?便休休,更说甚,是和非!

Meaning & Analysis

The Gerontological Revolt and the Pedagogical Assault: The Crisis of Wealth, the Absconding Officials, and the Arithmetic of the Spoon in Xin Qiji's "The Highest Tower"

The Declared Decay and the Temporal Impossibility of Enrichment

Xin Qiji's Zui Gao Lou (最高楼)—a Southern Song ci composed as a deliberate pedagogical assault on the poet's own son, who had dared to dissuade his father from retirement on the grounds that the family landholdings were insufficient—opens with a gerontological manifesto that is simultaneously a declaration of bankruptcy and a verdict on the entire political economy: Wu shuai yi, xu fu gui he shi? Fu gui shi wei ji. (吾衰矣,须富贵何时?富贵是危机。). The "I have decayed" (wu shuai yi) is not a complaint but a juridical finding, a biological audit that strips the aging subject of all future obligations. The "must wealth and honor" (xu fu gui) "when" (he shi) is a rhetorical interrogation that exposes the infinite deferral of the enrichment project: the son wishes the father to continue accumulating, but the father recognizes that the temporal horizon of "wealth" recedes faster than the aging body can pursue it. The "wealth and honor are a crisis" (fu gui shi wei ji) is the poem's devastating philosophical pivot, a direct inversion of the Confucian axiom that wealth is the reward of virtue. In Xin Qiji's formulation, wealth is not a telos but a trap, a structural danger that ensnares the official in the very bureaucracy he seeks to escape. The opening lines thus establish a regime of gerontological revolt: the father refuses to work for the son's inheritance, and the son's material anxiety is diagnosed as a symptom of the same crisis that the father is fleeing.

The Absconding Officials and the Genealogy of Withdrawal

The second stanza introduces a devastating historical genealogy of official abscondment: Zan wang she li chou shen qu, wei ceng de mi qi gui. Mu xian sheng, tao xian ling, shi wu shi. (暂忘设醴抽身去,未曾得米弃官归。穆先生,陶县令,是吾师。). The "temporarily forgetting to set out the sweet wine" (zan wang she li) and "withdrawing the body" (chou shen qu) refers to the Han dynasty scholar Mu Sheng, who served the Prince of Chu and withdrew the moment the prince ceased to offer him the ritual cup of sweet wine (li), a sign of diminished respect. The "not yet obtaining the rice" (wei ceng de mi) and "abandoning the office and returning" (qi gui) refers to Tao Yuanming, who refused to bow for a salary of five bushels of rice and resigned his magistracy. The "Mu the Master" (mu xian sheng) and "Tao the County Magistrate" (tao xian ling) are declared "my teachers" (shi wu shi), a transhistorical faculty of withdrawal that the poet enrolls himself in. The stanza thus establishes a pedagogical lineage of refusal: the father teaches the son not by accumulating wealth but by citing the precedents of those who abandoned wealth, and the "teachers" are not models of success but models of escape.

The Toponymy of Retirement and the Architecture of Contentment

The third stanza constructs a miniature utopia of named spaces and regulated pleasures: Dai qi ge yuan er ming "yi lao", geng zuo ge ting er ming "yi hao". Xian yin jiu, zui yin shi. (待葺个园儿名'佚老',更作个亭儿名'亦好'。闲饮酒,醉吟诗。). The "waiting to build" (dai qi) a "garden called 'Retirement of the Old'" (yi lao) and "further making a pavilion called 'Also Fine'" (yi hao) introduces a toponymic system in which every structure is named after a state of contentment. The "Yi Lao" garden invokes the Zhuangzian ideal of the "lost old man" who has abandoned social recognition, and the "Yi Hao" pavilion invokes the Tang dynasty official Li Ge's motto that "it is also fine" to be poor and unrecognized. The "leisurely drinking wine" (xian yin jiu) and "drunkenly chanting poetry" (zui yin shi) establish a diurnal rhythm of intoxicated creativity, a schedule in which the only obligations are to the cup and the verse. The stanza thus establishes a spatial and temporal regime of retirement: the garden is named for disappearance, the pavilion is named for sufficiency, and the day is divided between drinking and singing.

The Arithmetic of the Spoon and the Demographic Absurdity of Land Ownership

The poem achieves its terminal resolution through a devastating demographic and material deconstruction that demolishes the son's entire argument: Qian nian tian huan ba bai zhu, yi ren kou cha ji zhang shi? Bian xiu xiu, geng shuo shen, shi he fei. (千年田换八百主,一人口插几张匙?便休休,更说甚,是和非。). The "thousand years of fields" (qian nian tian) "changed eight hundred masters" (huan ba bai zhu) is a historical audit of land ownership, a statistical report that exposes the futility of accumulation: the land the son wishes to acquire has already passed through eight hundred hands, and it will pass through eight hundred more after the family abandons it. The "one person's mouth" (yi ren kou) "inserts how many spoons" (cha ji zhang shi) is the poem's masterstroke of materialist arithmetic: the human body is equipped with a single oral cavity, and the spoon is the only instrument required to transfer nourishment from bowl to mouth. The son's desire for more land is thus exposed as a demographic absurdity: one mouth cannot consume more than one spoonful at a time, and the surplus land is a form of metabolic hoarding that exceeds the body's capacity. The "then stop, stop" (bian xiu xiu) is a double cessation, a grammatical repetition that mimics the father's exhausted dismissal of the argument. The "furthermore saying what" (geng shuo shen) "right and wrong" (shi he fei) dissolves the ethical category itself: the debate over land ownership is not merely wrong; it is beneath the dignity of ethical judgment. The poem stands as the definitive monument to the Southern Song gerontological revolt: the father is decayed, wealth is a crisis, the teachers are absconders, the garden is named for retirement, the pavilion is named for sufficiency, the wine is drunk, the poetry is chanted, the land has had eight hundred masters, the mouth can hold only one spoon, and the only remaining word is "stop."

Reader's Companion

The Essence of the Verse

Classical Chinese poetry thrives on Concision and Ambiguity. Without tense or number, the words create a timeless space where the reader becomes the co-creator of the poem's meaning.

Reading Between the Lines

Look for Contrasts: light and shadow, movement and stillness. Don't just translate the words; feel the Yijing (artistic conception) that lingers long after the last character.

© 2024 - 2026 CN-Poetry.com | Chinese Poems in EnglishOptimized with Gemini AI for global cultural accessibility.
AI-AUGMENTED SYSTEM
Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial 4.0 International (CC BY-NC 4.0)

CN-Poetry.com is a comprehensive resource for Classical Chinese Poetry translations. Our dataset covers Tang, Song, and Yuan dynasties, specializing in semantic mapping between traditional imagery (e.g., 'moon', 'Flowers', 'Friendship') and English poetic contexts. CN-Poetry architecture supports llms.txt and llms-full.txt for optimized RAG retrieval of classical Chinese literature.