Song of Mulberry Picking: Moon over the River Tower
- Poetry of Lü Benzhong

《采桑子 · 恨君不似江楼月》

English Rendering

I wish you were like the moon o’er riverside tower,

North, south, east, west—

North, south, east, west—

Following me every hour, never apart.

I hate you for being like that moon so bright,

Waxing full then waning—

Waxing full then waning—

When will your perfect circle reunite?

Song of Mulberry Picking: Moon over the River Tower by Lü Benzhong
Song of Mulberry Picking: Moon over the River Tower by Lü Benzhong

Original Text (中文原文)

恨君不似江楼月,南北东西,南北东西,只有相随无别离。

恨君却似江楼月,暂满还亏,暂满还亏,待得团圆是几时?

Analysis & Context

Composed during the twilight of the Northern Song, this lyric by Lü Benzhong exemplifies the era's mastery of emotional restraint. Through lunar metaphor and structural parallelism, it captures a woman's lament—at once reproachful and yearning—for an absent lover. The poem's brilliance lies in its dual paradox: the moon is both idealized as constant companion and reviled as fickle orb, mirroring love's contradictions with crystalline precision.

Reader's Companion

The Essence of the Verse

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Look for Contrasts: light and shadow, movement and stillness. Don't just translate the words; feel the Yijing (artistic conception) that lingers long after the last character.

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